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Sun, Sep 16, 2018 in Chapter 1
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Dyohna Sun, Sep 16, 2018 edit delete
Dyohna
Candy 'I have no self awareness' Swirl everybody

Also, feel free to critique this page, or just advice on how to make it better. How to convey the same info differently? I don't dislike it but its not like my usual pages and I'd like to avoid something like this again. Even if this page is supposed to be pretty light-hearted. I'm gonna make a critique thread and go more in depth there soon!

Comments:

DestinyMason Sun, Sep 16, 2018 edit delete reply
DestinyMason
Candy! Be wary of the coddling, girl!

Anyways, the only issue about this page for me is in Panel 5, because the speech bubbles are in a weird position. Usually speech bubbles should be read from left to right, so I thought Candy was talking first.

But that's about it, really. This page was really good :)
Dyohna Sun, Sep 16, 2018 edit delete reply
Dyohna
Ah, I can see the confusion. I was setting it up to be read as up/down, maybe I should've made that more prevalent
MK_Wizard Sun, Sep 16, 2018 edit delete reply
MK_Wizard
I think these two play well off of each other. I think they're going to make a great team.
Dyohna Sun, Sep 16, 2018 edit delete reply
Dyohna
Ohh, cool that you sense chemistry already!
KarToon12 Sun, Sep 16, 2018 edit delete reply
KarToon12
Learning how to tie ties are always a great bonding moment. ^^
Dyohna Mon, Sep 17, 2018 edit delete reply
Dyohna
Haha it would've been a real touching moment if she taught him but she just... did it lol